| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
#Arigato-Anime
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
|
Sta.sh
the elaborate fashion design. especially how the slits are at the bottom of the top like that.
the fish nets are a nice touch and I love how they're used
the color palette is quite varied and is a nice combination
the hair highlights on this one are the favorite I've seen so far in your gallery, and it looks great
the shading on the bow in her hair is done quite nicely and adds a good amount of depth to the design
the belt seems to loop around on her right too early and looks awkward, and to look natural, it should loop a bit more to the right (not sure if what I'm trying to say is clear)
the clothes and slits look nice, but they need to flow a bit more, as they seem to stick out and be a bit too sharp in their angles
that hand on the left of the picture is in a weird position. if her hands on her hips, normally it would be facing down, not up
the eyelashes on the blinking eye need a bit more emphasis
overall cool piece, and I love the dynamic fashion XD
I know the hair shading is the best in this gallery... but I think I forgot how to do that on the others!
I took alot of care shading and highlighting the bow, i wanted to give it a PVC feel to the material!!
Whoops on the belt, now that you mention it... it does look alkward! XD
Sorry for the sharp angles with the slits but I was kind of aiming for that look anyway, I wanted the slits to keep their form!!
That hand on the left is suppose to be clenched and on her waist but I conviently managed to cover it up with a slit (If you haven't already guessed by now, that right hand it the same right hand on 'Happy Birthday Charlene' but turned to her eye).
The eyelashes on the closed eye do need more lashes!!
Thankyou for your critique!!