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March 17, 2011
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I did this for Harmony Day for my Italian Class. (It says 'Harmony Day' on the left then 'Love and Peace' on the right)

The picture looks a little bit lighter on the right and some of the lines don't match up in the middle because it was drawn on A3 and I had scanning issues.

It's Bakura from Yu-Gi-Oh!! XD
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Ryou Bakura and Yu-Gi-Oh belongs to Kazuki Takahashi
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*VolbeatFiro Mar 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
well, here we are, at the last critique

:la: favorite features

the use of the gray outline around the wings and the sleeves looks really cool, and the line art for the wings and bakura looks cool

the shading of the creases is a nice touch to the clothing and it looks good

love the idea of a earth in the heart shape like that


the blush and face is cute and came out well

:la: improvements

the earth seems to be lacking details on the left, and moving NA over in this space more would have helped

the orange borders around the letters don't really match the color palette, and it even blends with the red a bit on the right.

scanners fault probably, but yeah, that line down the middle is really distracting

overall this was pretty cool, and it's nice how you were able to incorporate something you liked into a school assignment.
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~Lexi--Xenaliephi Mar 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Thankyou for the critique!!

That grey outline outside of the wings irk's me off a bit because it somehow dosen't look right.
I confess I was looking at the 'Change Of Heart' card to get a feel for the creases.
I looked at a map of the world and used it as referance for the heart... I don't mean to be rude but what's 'NA'? O___o
Orange is the colour of harmony so that was how I incorporated it in this picture... as boarders. Whoopsie Daisy's on the blending! XD
My stupid scanner was being stupid!!! >:I
It was also mean to me as it somehow scanned one side darker than the other. >:I
I got a little irked when everyone in the class called him a girl. ;_;
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*VolbeatFiro Mar 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome

ah I gotcha

referencing the card makes sense

NA is North America XD

ah, makes more sense with deeper meaning for the orange

and mean kids being mean and calling him a girl eh? tsk tsk
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